Noora.....
He had his arms crossed as he stared into space with a serious expression painted on his face. And i , from behind the tree bush sat on the bench watching him closely. I really wished i knew what he was thinking about. Was he thinking about what lulu told him earlier, was he thinking about me...about us....?
A cool breeze passed by and it was nourishing, with the tree leaves rustling and my hair floating around ever so gently, not to mention the velvety colors that adorned the sky. I hugged myself closely in order to warm myself up when i noticed a light comming from far away. As the car came closer, i realized that it was my Raju our driver..!
Wai la2 raju killish mowagtik el7een...!!!
I quickly glanced back at 6alal and he still looked lost in his own world. Good...aham shay he doesnt notice raju. I got up, and looked around me. I can go through the bushes over there and 6alal wouldnt notice me, hop into the car and go home. Ughh..inshallah it works!
I was practically tiptoeing my way across the garden to reach my designated area, every moment making sure that i'm not visible to 6alal.
600000006 600000000000006.......!!!!!!
The horn of the car made me jump from my place. wai yuma!!!....i put my hand on my fast beating heart. I looked up wala 6alal's head snaps to the left and see's Raju in the car. The expression on 6alal's face was first of an alarmed one, then of confusion. i gulped when i saw 6alal walk to raju's car. I felt like i was getting dizzy.
god this cant be happining, this cant be happining....
I moved closer to a spot where i could see 6alal and raju clearly. I stood behind a tree and moved some branches with my hand to get a better view.
"Haaaaa raju....shlonik....." said 6alal, raising his hand in the air. 6alal stopped like 1 meter away from the car.
"zain baba 6alal.....zain...." answered raju moving his head side to side with a goofy smile on his face as he opened the window.
"sh3indik yay hnee....."
"ana yijee 7ag mama noora......"
"noora....laish...."
"3ashan ya5ith bait....."
wai yarabi ana ish'hal 7a'6 elle 3alai......!!!!!
"bs noora ra7at ilbait......"
Raju maskeen 7ada kan confused.
"enzain ehya mita dagat 3alaik....."
"gabil 10-15 minutes......"
I couldnt see 6alal's expression because i could only see his back.....his broad back. 6alal stepped in closer to raju and i couldnt see or hear what they were saying.
wai3 6alal wa5ir 5al ashoof...oo for gods sake 3alaw 9otkom....!!
6alal wa5ar shwy oo i saw raju with a phone in his hand. Why does he have a phone in his hand..??
asma3ak kamil kalamik ...b3d a7ibik aish gilt...
Heeeeeeeeeeehh......my phone ...my phone....!!!!!!
I quickly dug my hand into my lv bag and tried to pull out my mobile.
Ta7sib enne youm a6ali3 '3airik enne masma3ak...asma3ak..asma3aaak....
LAAA2 laaaa2 wainik...e6la3....e6la3....!!!
I finally pulled it out, and my hands were shivering so hard that i kept missing the end call button. After several attempts i finally shut the phone..........but when i lifted my head up i realized that it was too late...!!
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6alal............
Kint wagif barra afakir 3an il7ache ille galita lulu elyoum, oo mora'6e edish 3agle. Y3ne min9ijha hathe......lena noora bnt 5alti oo bas. lani a7ibha wala shay wala at5ayal nafse mitzawijha ...niha2iyan...!!y3ne min oo e7na 9'3ar oo e7na ma3ba3ath..li3abna oo kibarna ma3ba3ath, shlon atzawajha....
shlon atzawaj wa7da ma7ibha......shlon.....
kin wagif oo i analyze things when i noticed raju's car, sayig bait 5alti. wigaf jidam baitna, fa ri7tla. Solaft ma3a oo youm giltla ohwa laish ehnee wala egoole ena yay 3ashan ya5ith noora oo ewa9ilha ilbait. Shlon ya5ith noora etha ehya 6al3a 9ayirlaha foug ilrb3 sa3a 3ala ma2a'6in.
y3ne wainha, wain ra7at.....?? 7asait ib5ouf madry laish, y3ne yimkin etkoon bilbait....bs shlon etha ma3indaha sayara. ana shlon mafakart feeha.....?
Garabt mn ilsayara, "enzain dig 3alaiha oo shouf wainha fee...."
"okay ....." 6ala3 raju iltelephone oo eti9al 3ala noora. ana kint wagif 3ala a39abi oo kint a7awil ma5ale mo5i eroo7 b3eed 3ashan ma7atee....
mawa3ait ella asma3 '3niya, 7isabt enne im hallucinating wala shay, rakazt akthar bs laaa i'3niya. il9out kan mn warai yay....mn il7adee8a. youm wigfat il'3niya wala raju egoole,
"call end...sakkar telephone...."
5athait telephona oo shift inna ilcall ended. shakait blmaw'6oo3 oo eltifat wara 9oub il7adee8a mara thanya.
"NOORA.....?" i called. i didnt hear anything, but i caught some movement.I immediately went to the 7adee8a still calling her name. makint ga3d ashoof 3adil lena ilsima '6alimat oo mafta7aw laitat ille barra lail7een. "noora....entay hnee....noora....?"
i caught some more movement and this time i was certain that it was her. When i called one last time, she stopped. With three big strides i went over to her, grabbed her by her hand and whirled her around to face me.
"noora...entay hnee oo e7na endawir 3alaich....?!" i said irritated with her. she didnt reply.
"laish ga3da barra hnee bro7ich...laish mani6artai ilsayig da5il......?" still no reply. She just looked at me with her almond shaped dark brown eyes that glistened in the dark. "noora riday 3alai....."
"sheel eedik 3ani......." she said in a tone that didnt relate to her at all. I looked at her confused, and when i didnt let her hand she shrugged herself free, and backed a couple of steps. A7ar ma 3indy, abrad ma3indaha......
3a9abt y3ne 9ij lamobaliya halbnaya, ti6la3 mn kaifha oo tig3ad barra bil'6alma tin6ir ilsayig ma3ina kan yigdar sayigna ewadeeha aw fara7.
Bs youm 6ala3t'ha kanat tabe tamshe oo killish mo3ala ba3a'6ha.
"lazim aroo7....."
"noora ni6ray......" i said. she stopped and looked at me. "abeech to3ideene ennich mat3edeenha mara thanya..."
She looked at me, and her face was turning red. "mayi7tay lene mara7 aye hnee mara thnya...."
"sheno....laish....."
"bas...." she said and she looked at the ground. laaaaa feeha shay...laykoon mithawsha m3 fara7 wala shay.
"sheno 9ayir shay..."
"l2." she answered quickly.
"enzain laish matabeen etyeen mara thanya.."
she looked at me, wayiha ta3ban, "elle eshofik egool wayid mihtam....."
"shlon mahtam, akeed ahtam...t3arfeen halshay oo mayi7tay agoolich...."
she remained quiet and looked down again. A breeze came and caused her hair to float like black waves around her, and her dress to dance around her.She looked so sweet and innocent.
"noora...ma7ib ashoofich za3lana...goleele shfeech...."
"mafeene shay, oo momihim it3arf..."
"shlon momohim a3rf shili m'6aygich, ana wild 5altich oo 7isbat o5ooch....."
Madry sheno gilt bs 7a6at eedha 3la 7aljha oo lafat. Her shoulders shook oo i knew that she was crying, she always cried silently, ever since she was young. Oo galbi 3awarni, y3ne hathi noora oo mar'6a a7ad eza3ilha mn oo e7na '93ar oo ana adafi3 3anha oo mar'6a 3alaiha. Garabt minha,
"noora...."
"wa5ir 3ani....*gasp* mabeek roo7....*gasp*....."
"noora shfeech, 7acheene.....ymkin agdar asa3dich....." i said in a calm voice.
"enta elwa7eed elle matigdar etsawe shay.....fa please 5ala9 roo7..."
"oo ahidich chethe....mosta7eel...." i was close to her, inches apart. The wind let her silky hair hit my face, and it smelled like flowers, lemons......it was pleasing, that. I turned her around, and her face was covered with tears, and her sobs shook her body. Awal marra ashoofha ib hal7ala, oo 7ilaft enna ma5aleeha chethe oo lazim asawe ayshay 3ashan togaf ...masta7mal ashoofha chethe z3lana.
"6a-6alal....."
"shhh..ta3alay....ta3alay...." i said and hugged her to my chest. She felt so tiny with her thin frame, i wrapped my arms around her tightly and i felt the vibrations of her sobs against my arm. "afaaaa...noora tabche...ma9adig...."
"**gasp** bamoot...bamoot...5la9 mat7amal...." she said, and her voice came out muffled since i held her tightly to my chest. I could feel the hot breath touch my chest when she spoke and everytime she breathed.
"enzain goolele ......e3tabreene o5och o goleele 3ashan asa3dich....."
"latgool chethe......"
"sheno....."
She pushed herself away from me, and my hands fell back to my side.
"enta mo o5oy......." when i didnt reply she added, "enta wild 5alti...."
I looked at her, oo mofahim shili ga3d etgoola.
"laish.....shilfarg...."
She stayed quiet, and after a while she said, "fee farg ikbeer ......farg ikbeer...."
And with that she walked away.
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Thank u.....
Luv u ;***
Gudnight......
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6 years ago
do you know how addicted I am to your story? ya3nee I LOOOVED your first story and you know that, I made it clear but this one ma adree laish I sit there refreshing my browser 3la my phone an6er post, please let her tell him and it will the SLAP on his face, a much needed one ENARFIZ, she is amazing shloun you cant love her ;(
ReplyDeletebut I love you ;**
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ReplyDelete7abeebti maskeeeeena:( ya3ni ifham ur not that dumb of an ass! Fee farg! and i'm so glad inha tikalimat maskitat
ReplyDeleteand babe truly this story is really great mashala 3alaich ur talented;*
next post plz !!!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THE STORY ;***
maskeena noora and 6ala 7ada 9aida ;p
6alal* ;p
ReplyDeleteIFFFFF! 7araaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam!!!
ReplyDelete6amz
omg that was intense
ReplyDeleteoo wallah i had to comment on the other post.. ya3ni ma gidart an6ir hehehheeehe;p
i love it i love it i love i love i love it
AHHH i just love it!!
not goodnight !! i dont like goodnights !!! atleast one more post please?
ReplyDelete7abeeebtyy Nora! maskeeena its not easy kilish! ow ba3dain yeaaah aku farg kibeer between a cousin and a brother!! waay 6alal shfeh ghaby ma yefham? 7aram ya3ne its obvious that she love you efhaaam! way 7arnyy! shes so sweeet how cant he love her?
ReplyDeletepls continue! and please make them a bit longer, ma yamdene andimij ela khalas el post.. thanks babe I love yoou;**
more more more ;(
ReplyDeleteishde3waaaaa !
ReplyDeletehatha mysamoona post
hatha isamoonah paragraphain b3dain cliffhanger..
ma arthah tara:p
I LOVE UR STORY!! WAITING! :D
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ReplyDelete7abeeebti noora :( its even sadder that its based on/inspired by a true story.
ReplyDeletei love raju haha *nswered raju moving his head side to side with a goofy smile on his face* haha i have a vivid image in my head of this scene ! lol
if la7atht ini akrah kil 6alal oo ta2akadt ib this post!
ReplyDeletei7er ya3ni it5af 3alaiha ya3ni shino mihtsm feeha!! read between the lines u dumbass!
iksarat 5a6re:'(
ps. 3ajabni "kabat" fa i agree on the new names
mihtam**
ReplyDeleteoo and btw ASMA333AAAAAAAAAAAKK KAMIL KALAMIIIK BA3D A7IBIK AISH GILT! maymer yoom masma3 feeha hal song<3
7abeeeeeeeeeebti!!!!!!!!!! OMG THATS IT!! tara im overly obessesed with ur story , its new , its nice , amazing*, its 100% interesting!!!!!
ReplyDeletehiiiiiiiiiiiiii
ReplyDeletei was msafraaaaaa
omggggggg ma tadreeen shnooo i love ur new story. my black berry broke fa ma gdart i read ay shay.
waaay i soo love noora. oo waaaayed afham mawqfha.
7araam.
and 6alal yabeela 6raaag 3ashan yistaw3b.
bas i have to say inaa shloon rba6tay the old story with the new one is amaaaaaaaazing.
i think tist7qeeen first place bdoon mosharakat a7ad ib kil jadara.
so mn ilyoum o ray7 ur my #1 blogger bdoon mosharakat a7ad.
SHIT I started tearing in tech class !! thank god i forgot my usb so i dont do the work ;D
ReplyDeletePLEASE im begging you, im going thru the same thing.. Please right a longer post;*
THANK YOU I LOVE YOU ;**
-stranger from tech.
Urrr sstoorryy is soo amaazziing!! waayidd andimiiij feeehha madry a7is'ha '3aair other story's that i reaad wala i love it!
ReplyDeleteI LOVEEEEEEEEEED IT! OK la mn 9ijj seriosuly I'm so hooked al 7een. shakly bakoon na6raa 3ala my tiptoes for the next post walla, OMG 7adyy I can't wait for the next one!!!! UUf I seriously hate him for saying that about her and 7araam mskeena el bntt, walla mo shay chiii y3ni noora she seriously broke my heart. O la b3d uhwa....7maaaaar enzain laiiish aby afhaaam laiiish :'(((((((((((
ReplyDeleteADDOCTEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!<3.. bss pls nabby longer posts!;D i love uuuuuuuuu;***
ReplyDeleteAAAAAH NO NO NO !! :( moore :/ 7adee indimajjtt ! aww noora wala kasra 5a6re :(
ReplyDeletelove;**: awwww 7beebty ...luv u 2 ;** oo ee 7ada enarfiz shlon mayistaw3ib...
ReplyDeletecupid: thnk u wallah thnk u...;** oo ee 7ada '3abi shlon mayifham...
Anon: hehe ee 9aida oo bs.....;p
6amz: ee i knw ..maskeena...
chanel: 3alainaaaaaa hehe ;p oo yuo it was intense...
Anon: cuuuuteeee...hehe bs tara i need 2 do my projects wala i fail ....
Exquisite: loooooool enzaaaaaain i'll try...;p
Anon: looool...;p
Noush:hehe aham shay paragraphain...7aram 3alaich ...;p oo i'll try 2 write longer...
Person: fiona....@@
Scareytoes: hehe ee kila esawoon chethe madry lasih ;p
khayzarana (stick): eeeeeeee ana b3d em3alga 3alaiha ...7ilwa il'3niya wayed..!
Emnilia: awwwww thnx wayid wayid...u guys r the best..!!
Nada: awalan 7mdila 3l salama...thnyan uv been misses..thalithan...inshalla it9ala7 ur bb...oo a5eeran...YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY 6A6 6A6 6A6 6A6 **SHARBIKA** I'M ONE HIYAAAAAAAAA...;***
stranger from tech: weeeeee 3asa bs ma7ad shafich ;p oo inshalla elle etmoreen fee yistaw3b oo loves u bk ;**
Anon: thnx hun oo i luv u 2...!!!!!
Sunset: ee madry laish mayistaw3ib..ashwa ina it didnt happen to me chan hijamt 3alai wallah ;p
Anon: luv u 2 ..;** oo a7awil aktib longer posts 3ashankum....
*R: ee wayid tiksir il5a6ir maskeena...!! oo i'll post 2day bilail i thnk...:**
ReplyDeletepokes kabooots eyes
ReplyDeleteba3dain intay shino @@
il7ain katba
"person:"
ba3dain fiona? shlon hathi balla??
chanel hug? :P
3a9aya: la itrag3een ihni oo ihnak 3ashan 3ijbni kabat m2dri shino we can all see u like the "person" that came up with the nicks fa tsayrenhum ;)
fina 7addich funny , u make me laugh everytime ,,, ana awal shay i didnt get it , when u said kabat , bas ba3dain FI9ALT MN LAUGHTER!!
ReplyDeletePerson: somoo7a ya person...;* oo nawya ti3meene by poking my eyes ;p b3dain mno yiktiblikom posts haaaaaaaaaaa
ReplyDeleteEmnilia: tsk tsk tsk en'6amaitay m3 person ashoof haaaaa....y3ne 3ajibkom kabat...;p
ur story 3ajeeeeeeeeba 7adha new! fikrt.ha yideeda w wayeed 7ilwa
ReplyDeletetaksir il 5a6iir :(
keep it up
la tig3iden it'thilina 3ala ure posts ma aktib oo haaaa oo maaaaa
ReplyDeleteba3dain ma igolon ha!!
tsk tsk tsk
*shakes head with dissappointment*
ba3dain kaboot akeed Emnilia is gna like kabat i came up with it (h)ishlon ma ikooon 7ilew? :S
Emnilia: affa 3alaych taben a6ali3lich new nick? bas allah ihadach isimich 9a3ab =/
ghyri oo a6ali3lich a nick just as retarded as kabooot oo 3a9oooi
hahhha fiona kabat just texted me...
ReplyDeleteHUGGGGGGG ;**
hhehe
Anon: thnx hun....oo ee wayid tksir il5a6ir
ReplyDeletePerson:ish'hal thi8a elle feech ya person..**kaboot bainha oo bain nafis'ha 3ajibha isimha**...waaaai ilmoshkila chanel gamat etsameene kaboot b3d...ur a virus person ;p
Chanel: haha samaiteeha "fiona" yawaaaaailich ;p lol....call her person wala tihjim 3alaich...;) oo 9irtay itsameene kabat entay b3d.....
Emnilia: weeeh weeeeeh ana 9irt wayid stuff bas "fina" 3umri ma 9irt =/ is that ure way of dali3ing me? ana i suggest u keep the nicknames for the pros ;)
ReplyDeleteya3ni APPRECIATED WAYID bas fina ishwaya 8aweeya =/ oo ma tinbili3 ya3ni kind of inzain ma ra7 ajamlich kilish ma tinbili3 :P
bas i say that out of love ya3ni in5alina honest min awal shay a7san mu?
ee 5oush ma za3altay l2na kilish mali 5ilg arathich
ps: ma kint ra7 arathech either way :P
person: "fina" loooool thats funny.....hahahahhahahhahhah ;D 7ilwa minich ya emnilia
ReplyDeletechanel:
ReplyDeleteallah i3eenich
my sympathies all the way :P
bas mi5alif shakilha chithee nou3 ile u lafe ma3aha * more like 3alayha :P * bottom line u lafe oo good company ;)
ps- ma 3alaych amir call me person ..fiona ishwaya ya3ni kaboot tisti5if damha oo u adra ib the inner jokes of kaboot =/
pps- kaboot u know i love u rite (A)
kaboot: ana shayfa 7ali =( 7aram 3alaych
dont call me a viruis =@
im more like the dalai lama everyone follows me (A) shino asawee 8diwa smillah 3alayh =$
chanel ;) kamlay bil i6fara ma awa9ich
ee eee thi7kay
ReplyDeletema rada ismich kaboot :p
nothing bets that
IBACHI!!!!! ;( wallah its soo saaaaaaad!! taksir L 5a6ir Noora! waaaayid im3awra galbi :p
ReplyDeletePerson: lol..haha....oo i admitt chanel does laugh 3alai oo she calls me "9aida" 3ala6ool..;p bs i luv being a 9aida yuba tk it easy....;)))oo a7la 8idwa entay...;**
ReplyDeleteglittery butterflies: ee maskeena..matiswa 3alaiha...
loool!! kitabt fiona ;3ala6 moo 8a9dy fina!!;p 7adkom fa9laaaa!! yalla 3ad 6al3eeely nickname !! pweez
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