Thursday, October 1, 2009

Mulish (25-B)

Dedicated to Mango ;*


ENJOY ;)
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7 years ago.......


**RING RING***

"alooooo.....helooooooooooo" answered malaak.

"ahlan ahlaaaaaan....shfeeech mn il9ub7 e6arsheen messegat...."

"abee agolk shay mohim knt.....ee 9a7 enta laish maradait...?"

"knt ma3 ilmodeer elle 3indi...7ada 7achir ! bsss lazm antibih y3ne tawne mitwathif 3araftay....bssss offfffffff wayid sho'3l ! elmohiiiiiiiiim shb'3aitay tgoleeen ?"

"emmmmmm !!!!! ra7 ashtereeee sayaraaaaaa a5eraaaaaan !! "

"ahhh yalla yalla 3albarakaaa...maba'3aitay ....."

"haaaaai hehehhhhee walla sayarteee cool...."

"sheno cooool ??!?!! garamba3a !!"

"eee 5o tawne sayga y3ne akeed mara7 ya5thonlee sayara yideeda...bss since tawne 9rt 19 oo 9arlee 1 year asoog faa ra7 ya5thonle sayara...."

"eee yallla zaaaain.....shno mfakra ta5theeen ??"

"walla madry...bacher bnroo7 oo nshoof....abaaaaaai 7adi mshta6a !"

"7mdella weshikir..."

"3alaaaaaaik....hhehehehe...."

"ok laklak lazm aroo7..."

"waaaaai3 s3ooooood shno laklak ??? ma7b this name !!"

"shno ismch chethee b3d shswy ana....haha..."

"ismeee malaaak mo laklak ! ayshay thany hehe..."

"tsk tsk 9ij laai galaw isim 3ala mosama...."

"awwwwwww ana ur angel...."

"laaa 3iksay ur name oo y9eer esim 3ala mosama....."

"ha ? m.a.l.a.a..k....sooo y9eer k.a.l.a.a.m !!!! haaaaaaai sh8a9dik !!!! shno ana garga !!"

"kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak ...."

"masheee masheee...."

"hahaha a7ibich....."

"oo ana akthar....hehe yallla jabil sh'3lik...bye !"

"laaa7'6aaaa la7'6aaaa....bashofich elyoum..."

"haaa laaa madryyyyyy...."

"yallaaaaa 3aad mnziman moshayfich...."

"ay minzimaaan....sbo3 ile6af shiftny...."

"eee hathak sbo3 ille 6af.....haaa shgiltay?"

"emmmmm okay ;) the usual place ok...bye"

(The last normal convo between them)^

"helooooooo....." malak said as she got into s3oods car.

"shno hathaaa ?!?!"

"ha ? ohhh hehehhe catalogaaat....."

"maaal..?"

"sayaraaat !!! help meeeeee......"

"haha yalla yeebay..." s3ood took a catalogue from her and started scanning through. After 30 minutes s3ood set the catalogoues down and let out a breath.

"haaaa shgilt ? ay wa7da..."

"9ara7attan tabeen...wala sayara layga 3alaich...."

"haw laaaaish......hatha catalogoue bmw, mercedes, range, porshoue, jaguar...shno b3d..."

"entay maynfa3 ma3ach elle wanaaaait !"

"wanaaaaaait......?!?!!? makosho'3l"

"hahahha at'3shmar...3jbony katha sayara walla bss 5all as2lch ashof ethe zaina oo yimdi7onha wala la2 3shan matiwahigain feha..."

"hehehhehe...3abali...." she shot him a look and hugged him. they stayed there talking for a while and then it was time to go so she left...but not without a goodbye kiss and innocent one ;p

(The last date/kiss)^

3 days later....."shfeeha hathee matrid walashay ????" s3ood tried calling malaak but she wouldnt pick up, messaged her bss ham mako fayda. He was confused ....he thought that maybe he did something wrong bldate..but nothing out of the ordinary happened. After the fifth day he decided to go to her uni and wait for her...bss he didnt catch any glimpse of her. He was really confused....and worried.

the sixth day....

s3ood was at the diwaniya with the guys when his friend fahad came in and sat beside him,

"haaa shlonk al7een??"

s3ood looked up at him confused, "ibsheno...?"

"shfeeek....malaak...."

"ha...? shdarak...?"

s3ood was confused...ok yimkn ena fahad's girlfriend is malak's best friend..bss malak momino3 elle she lets people into their problems. soo s3ood assumed ena 9ar shay oo galat malak 7ag her friend elle galat 7ag her bf elle tawa gallaaa....

"sima3t......shoof adry mit'thayig bss enta tistahal akthar mnchethee...oo a5er wa7da knt atwa8a3 tsawee chethee ehya malak...."

S3ood was really confused now, "ha ? enta shg3d tgol...?"

fahads face drained, he realized that s3ood doesnt know what hes talking about, "laa 5ala9 ensa...." he didnt want to be the one to tell s3ood.

"fahoood shfeek....ti7acha..."

"ana 7asbalee tadree...."

"adry..? malaak feeha shay !"

"laaa ...malak in5a6bat oo ibtizawaj !"

"sheno...????!??!!??!"

(that was the last day s3ood and malaak were considered a couple)

(s3ood never did hear from malaak after their last date)

(and s3ood was never the same after that....he was a completely different person)

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luv u ;**

gudnight ;))




33 comments:

  1. firrstt...going to read

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  2. 2nnnnnd awal mara ambay wanasa!!
    7aram s3ood bil3ither he changed bdoon sibab she left him:(
    next post plz hatha kan 7ada short bacher plz!!!

    luv sama;**

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  3. 3rdddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    yala ill go read now :D

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  4. sama: second !!!!!!! hehehehe sooon inshallaaaa

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  5. NOOOOOO!! 7araaaaaam yatly bachyaaa!!!
    Laish sawat chithy :o?! 9ara7a mayen3aaaf!!!
    Maskeeen S3ood!! Yestahel a7san minha!!
    Thaaanx a looooot for the post ;***
    im gonna be waiting for the next one :D

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  6. ticklish:hehehe eee mskeeen ;p ur most welcome ;)))))

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  7. mita the next post ?(aa)
    btw i love u alot;**

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  8. anon:7ayateeeee luv u 2 !!!! inshalla as soon as i can i will

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  9. you posteddddddddddddddddd :D a7eeen bagra

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  10. mskeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen 7abeeebi sa3ooodi sij 7aqeeeeera malaaaaak...min sijha it3af sa3oooodi he is so amazing ow cute ow aaaaaah he is perfect tara itha ma tabeee ya3ni ana abeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh...

    giltich put her in a room with ahmed and kill them off ma6i3tini lol

    love u kaboot for postingggggg :*

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  11. s3ooooood yakser il 5a6er 7ada maskeen o Malak '3athatneee
    bas loved the post o plzzz nabee more posts;D

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  12. NOOO PLEASE MAFI GOODNIGHT!! its very shooort, o u know us readers are craving for more, please poooost :D abe ashoof ish r7 y9eer with them, and ZAIN!!!!! post pweeeez :D
    MWAAUh ;* xoxoxo

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  13. nawariiii: yes i did !!!!! ;p lol lail7eeen m9amima t'thib7enhom ;p gunshot wala a bomb...??

    red:hehehe glad u liked it ;p

    pearla: heheheeh 7ayateee i'll post soon....patience patience ;p ;****

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  14. now we understand why he's sooo the way he is ..
    uff i hate this malak .. she's SO ANNOYING and she gets on my nerves.
    s3ood and zain should be together <3 !!
    i love you clossiii xox

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  15. yooy: yaaa 7adaaaa ;p oo luv u tooooooooo ;***

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  16. waaaaaiii wa3laayaaa mskeen kesaar 5a6rii
    oo wai3 i hate malaak ... Zain is waaay better!!

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  17. omg!! malak is such a ......something!!!
    ya3ne she changed s3ood do a serious type of man!!???
    wallah 8har!!
    zaga!!!
    thanks for posting<3

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  18. s3ood kiser 5a6ry oo i really hate malaak now...

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  19. weeeeee :(
    iff i hate malak !:@
    she doesnt have the right to doo that !:/
    maskeen s3ood :(

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  20. next post plz!!:P
    cant wait!!
    when r u posting? today 9a7??

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  21. I love the post thank me and my friend that day we were ga3deen in class sar7aneen infakir what happened between them exactly thanks!!!
    s3ood 7ada ma yistahal ili sawita fee oo 7ada yistahal wa7da a7san minha
    I love u;**

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  22. i loved the post!! but it was too short!!:(
    when is the next post!!
    are u posting tonight??

    luv sara;**

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  23. Love it...
    Started Reading last night o I'm hooooked...
    I read ur previous 2 stories last week o started mulish last night...
    Waaaaaaaaayed 7lwa...
    3afya keep it up...
    Love ur style...
    Love u ya a7la closet...
    Don't let ur readers wait too long...
    ;***************

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  24. next post plz!!;**
    -luv u kaboot;**

    la6awleeeeeen!!!!!!:P

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  25. next poooooost !!!
    mitaaa??
    cant wait kabooot!!:**

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  26. ilyoum naby post imbacher plz cant wait aby agra!!!!!

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  27. kabooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooott oola 3 days without posting:O:O:O: ur fans!!!

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  28. kaboot bila9a7 9arlich 2moro ra7 itkamleen il 1 week!!
    ur faaaaans!!:O
    ilyoum post!!pleeeeeeeease!!

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  29. you owe us an extra long post malee sh'3el :p

    lama

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  30. Kaboooooooooot !! yallaaa pleaaase next post! malaina we7na nan6er:p

    p.s- i am a silent reader bs i couldnt wait so i commented;p

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  31. next post ilyom wala u told us when u're free 9arlich 6 days and u didn't have time for ur fans!!:O:0:O:0
    ilyom loooong post ilyom ilyom liyooom!!!

    luv dhs;*

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